Lydia4072
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What do you think of this poem?

You're so sweet

You are the Candy in my day,
the Kiss in my sky and the Love in my heart...
My name is Casey McMenamin
And I love you

Respuesta :

I think it's beautiful.

Very well written.
I think that the poem is beautiful , it has an unique structure and a beautiful ring . The poem has simple and sweet words that make it sound more luscious . You should totally leave it like that , it's perfect.